~WhisperedChoir

Eirn Newdall

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About Me Member Wannabe Poet WhisperedChoirFemale/United States

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Songs of Existing

Songs of an Existance so meaningless.. Whispering words of false joy Hopeing for something to hold Needing someone to taste
They hold him high to touch the sky and Burn it with devils fire He turns on them revealing their flaws For them to gaze with prying eyes
Idoliseing, Fantisizing Forever needing his touch. They spew about like maggots filth To fawn upon his every whim
He is deception in mortal form Life so elegantly played He tricked me once, That was all it took. To lead me to my Death

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Break me..Pain and Anguish I will Give you Your solid cry Scream of Pain I will break you
Everything you say Everything you are Seems to be nothing
Your words Always taunting and teasing Always trying to damage those around you Constantly in a chaotic harmony
Yet you can not destroy me I am stronger then you You will not break me Break me..
by ~WhisperedChoir

Songs of ExistingSongs of an Existance so meaningless.. Whispering words of false joy Hopeing for something to hold Needing someone to taste
They hold him high to touch the sky and Burn it with devils fire He turns on them revealing their flaws For them to gaze with prying eyes
Idoliseing, Fantisizing Forever needing his touch. They spew about like maggots filth To fawn upon his every whim
He is deception in mortal form Life so elegantly played He tricked me once, That was all it took. To lead me to my Death Songs of Existing
by ~WhisperedChoir

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Mon Feb 28, 2005, 4:46 PM

So ive been waiting for a few days now and nobodys left any comments to my poem, Its sorta discouraging espically when im on like comment alert. Ive heard it was good from my friends but they have to say its good, So here i am like waiting for someone to comment. COMMENT DAMNIT

In all fairness i thought it was a good poem but it is my first deviation so i understand peoples unwillingenss to like for the most part awnser too it, Hopefully as i get more up it will be like 'WOOT' comment city.

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